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Chapter 22: Revelations

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Chapter 22: Revelations

written by anonymous author

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Angela - Your house?
Jordan - Well, you don't have to, i mean, i thought it might be, like, a change or something
Angela - No, i mean i'd love to go to your house

Angela VO - wow! Jordans house! I feel privaliged or something!

They start up the car and drive out of the car park.

Meanwhile we see Ricki walking back to where Brian, Rayanne and Sharon are standing.

Sharon - (to Ricki) What did you say to her?
Ricki - I think i just made her feel, like, we're not her friends anymore
Sharon - What? Ricki!
Brian - Well, at least you got that right!
Sharon - Brian!
Brian - Well, she was cheating on me! With HIM!
Rayanne - Jesus, Brian! You really think she was going to choose you over Jordan Catalano? I mean, come on! She was majorly crushing over him since, like, forever!

Brian looks hurt and Sharon looks like she could slap Rayanne.

Ricki - Rayanne!
Sharon - Yeah, i mean, that was kinda low!
Rayanne - Oh please! Like you don't think that too! How many times has she complained to you guys how much she liked him. Of course she's going to go back to him every chance she gets.
Sharon - Yeah (quietly) but that doesn't help Brian does it?

Suddenly Brian runs down the steps and out of the gates. Ricki runs after him and after watching them for a few minutes Sharon and Rayanne look at each other and run after them too.

We see Jordan and Angela standing at Jordans door. They go in and Angela looks around.

Angela VO - God! this place is like minimalistic or something. It's like its a museum or a tomb, not a home.

There is noise in a room next to them.

Man's Voice - Who's there?
Jordan - Shit!
Angela - What?
Jordan - It's my old man! What's he doing home?

They go into the room and Angela see's a man slumped in an armchair with a bottle of beer in his hand and a few empties aroun his feet.

Jordan - What the hell are you doing here?
Man - Well thats a nice way to greet your old man!
Jordan - What are you doing home?
Man - Introduce me to your friend son

Jordan stands trying to control his anger in front of Angela. The man stands up, and sways for minute before he holds his hand out.

Man - Well, seeing as my son is too rude to introduce me (extra politely, taking her hand and bowing) my name is Tom Catalano, i'm Jordans father!
Angela - Well, i'm Angela Chase and i'm.....
Jordan - Angela's my girlfriend.

Angela VO - Did he really say that? Wow! Jordans Girlfriend He actually said it.

Tom - OOOHHH A girlfriend? Jordans never had one of those before!
Jordan - Come on Angela (taking her hand)
Tom - Where are you going?
Jordan - To my room!
Tom - Well, son, be careful! I don't want another set of parents round here in nine months looking for child support!

Angela's mouth drops open and Tom starts laughing. Jordan leads Angela to his room, his face like thunder.

Angela sits on his bed, silent and her face is pale.

Jordan - It's not like, what you think or anything...

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You have 2 choices: What should happen next?
  1. Angela says she doesn't want to know:
    Chapter 23: So go by anonymous author (28 Feb 2003)
    no more subchapters.
  2. Jordan explains:
    Chapter 23: Loss by anonymous author (10 Nov 1999)
    11 more subchapters.

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“Lately, I can't even look at my mother without wanting to stab her repeatedly.”

Angela Chase, Episode 1: "My So-Called Life (Pilot)"