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Chapter 3: The smoke

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Chapter 3: The smoke

written by anonymous author

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Rickie:
(very worriedly) Are you alright?
(Rickie runs to Rayanne. She ignores him and stands up)
Rayanne:
Yes! I'm fine! (goes to the sinks to mess around with her hair)
Rickie:
That looked really bad.
Rayanne:
Gosh! You've never bumped into someone? (laughs nervously to hide her embarrassment. Sees Angela looking at her through the mirror. She gets serious) I can take care of myself. (nervous laugh) Anyway, you'll be late for Katimski's.
Rickie: umm, right... (He passes Angela, touches her arm) We should go. (Angela looks thoughtful as they leave. Rayanne looks sad as she's left alone to straighten her ponytail. She stares at herself in the mirror)
Rayanne:
Screw you. (she grabs her bag and heads off, passes Angela and rickie in the hall. Bumbs into some girl talking to a jock)
Girl:
Hey! Watch it!
(Rickie looks at Angela)
Rickie:
What are you thinking of?
Angela:
I was just... she knew we had english.
Rickie:
So?
Angela:
I just though it was funny. (Rickie look puzzled)



(Rayanne walking through the parking lot with her bag bouncing beside her. She spots Brian who's wandering around, looking lost)
Rayanne:
(looks naughty) Looking for me you bad boy?
Brian:
(spins around) What are you doing here? (sounds cross)
Rayanne:
(hysterical laugh)Stupid question genious!
Brian:
What do you want!
Rayanne:
You tell me. I'll do whatever you want!
Brian:
Just go okay! I've got better things to do!
Rayanne:
Ooh, you're so sexy when you get mad.
(Brian blushes) What better things? Don't you realize you're cutting class? This could affect your grades... your future!
Brian:
Who are you to say that?
Rayanne:
(even more hysterical laughter)You crack me up, Krakow! (calms down a little) What ARE you doing here?
Brian:
None of your business.
BrianVO:
Sometimes I kind of love talking to Rayanne Graff. She already hates me so you don't have to like... watch your mouth.
Rayanne:
You looking for Angela?
Brian:
(quickly) What do you mean?
Rayanne:
I jsut though you'd like to know she's right over there (points) in Jordan's car having wild monkey sex with him... (innocent smile)
Brian:
(looks hurt) No. I think that's your place. (look satisfied and starts heading to Jordan's car)
Rayanne:
(looks hurt, with a desperate tone of voice) Don't forget your camera!

(Jordan sitting in his car. Humms a tune, looking happy. Hears a knock on the window. ignores)
(shot of Brian who's about to leave. knocks again)
Jordan:
What is it Tino? (turns to see. Sees Brian.) Oh... (opens the door. Brian sits down)Hey Brain.
Brian:
Yeah, hi. Jordan, right? (stupid expression)
Jordan:
(puzzled) yeah... (Brian looks like he could kill himself)
So what's up?
Brian:
Nothing... (long pause. Jordan lights a cigarette) How about you? Have you -uh- been reading anything?
Jordan:
(looks at him) Look... you wanna talk about Angela or...
Brian:
What? No!
Jordan:
I mean I just figured since you probably have some good reason to like, cut school.
BrianVO:
He isn't supposed to know that. (aloud) oh.
Jordan:
So...
Brian:
So?
Jordan:
So what are you doing here?
BrianVO:
Okay, he's definately not supposed to ask so many questions.
Jordan:
Cause if you wanna talk about Angela, I... it's okay with me.
Brian:
i don't want to talk about Angela Chase.
Jorda:
Oh. So you want a smoke?
















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