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Chapter 6: Smells like trouble...

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Chapter 6: Smells like trouble...

written by Purecookie

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Brian:
I think I'm gonna pass...
Graham:
Oh. Wh--- (really puzzled) Okay.
Jordan:
I'm hungry.
Graham:
Good--- come in. (turns to Brian) You sure you don't want to?
Brian:
No I'll be--- going. (Graham nods and head's in with Jordan. Brian looks like he's about to change his mind but sighs and turns to go)


(Jordan and Graham walk into the restaurant from the kitchen, Hallie leaning to the counter)
Graham:
You sit down...
Jordan:
Like... where can I sit?
Graham:
Oh anywhere. There aren't many customers as you can see so- (Jordan sits down to the finest looking table) Oh that's fine, that's fine!
Hallie:
(walks to Jordan) Hi! You're Jordan right?
Jordan:
(looks up with his gorgeous eyes) Yeah. Who are you?
Hallie:
I'm Hallie, I don't think you would remember me but I'm Graham's partner and---
Jordan:
(interrupts) You don't look like Angela's mom?
Hallie:
What? No I'm just-- Anyway, right now I'm your waitress so what can I get you? (notices) Oh, here's the menu...
Jordan:
(looks at it for a moment) Uh... I... (tries to read the menu) uh... I don't know...
Hallie:
Tough choice, huh?
Jordan:
no I just...
Hallie:
Well call me when you've decide okay?
Jordan:
Uh...
(Hallie goes over to Graham)
Hallie:
So are they still going out?
Graham:
Who?
Hallie:
You know, Jordan and Angela!
Graham:
What, I--- guess so.
Hallie:
He looks like he's having trouble with the menu---
Graham:
Oh... (remembers) Oh! He--- I guess he has problems with reading. Like, he can't really read or... I don't remember quite what...
Hallie:
(understands) I'll go offer him that steak that you made for that Smythe person who---
Graham:
Didn't show up, right, do that. (Hallie goes. Brian storms in from the door, he's shirt is ripped and his face's in blood) Brian? What happened to you???
Brian:
I just had to... (doesn't know what to say, goes to Jordan) Look I was going to your car to get my coat and these guys--- they just attacked me and I tried to--- they kicked me in the ground and---
Jordan:
Tino? (gets up and out of the restaurant, graham runs after him. Hallie offers Brian a piece of paper to stop the bleeding Jordan runs to his car, two guys are having a smoke leaning to it)
guy1:
Hey Catalano! Some nerd was here trying to sneak into your car, man.
guy2:
Yeah! He looked like he was about to cry, I swear (laugh)
(Jordan comes closer)
Jordan:
You beat him up?
guy2: Yeah we totally---
(Jordan hits him in the face, he falls)
guy2:
I'LL TELL TINO!
guy1:
Wh--- he tried to sneak into your car, man!
Jordan:
Leave him alone!
guy1:
look really, it was this awful wimp and---
Jordan:
You just shut up!!! (looks like he's gonna punch him too!)
SHUT UP!
guy1:
Chill man! We just had fun with that creep---











































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“Lately, I can't even look at my mother without wanting to stab her repeatedly.”

Angela Chase, Episode 1: "My So-Called Life (Pilot)"