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Chapter 25: Uncomfortable

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Chapter 25: Uncomfortable

written by jordana

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Jordan - I want to come in, i mean,it was like, my fault or something

Angela VO - Thank You

They go into the house and we see Angelas parents and Danielle, Camille and Sharon, Rickie and Brian standing around looking worried.

Angela VO - Oh My God!

Patty - Angela?!
(everyone rushes over and crowds them, all talking at the same time)
Patty - Where the hell have you been? We thought you'd been kidnapped or something worse!
Graham - We're so glad you're ok!
Patty - Of course we are but where have u been?
Graham - We called all your friends and they didn't know where u were!

Angela VO - Have they forgotten who is standing next to me?

Jordan - was my fault really
Patty - Yes?
Jordan - Well, um...we were at the loft and um....Angela fell asleep and by the time i realised i was in no fit state to like, drive her home, so i like, ,left her asleep.
Patty - Thank you..Jordan..

Jordan shrugs uncomfortably and moves to "hide" behind Angela. Everyone is relieved and leaves, except Jordan.

Patty - I think we need to talk

Graham tells Danielle to go to her room and Patty looks sternly at them

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