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Chapter 18: Jordan spends the night

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Chapter 18: Jordan spends the night

written by anonymous

added on: 23 Jun 2004 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Angela: Nothing, everythings fine(forces a smile)

Patty: ok then, dinner's in the kitchen.

Angela: Thanks.


Angela(vo): I didn't know what to do, I wanted to help him, but I knew there was nothing I could do to help. i had to let him, deal with it on his own. I just hope he doesn't shut me out.

She hears a knock on her bedroom window. She walks over and opens it, and sees Jordan sitting in the tree outside her window.

Angela: What are you doing here?

Jordan: Can I come in?

Angela: No, my parents would like freak if they knew you were here.

Jordan: Just for a minute.

Angela: Fine, whatever just hurry up.

Jordan climbs in her window and sits on her bed.

Angela: Why are you here?

Jordan turns to face her for the first time since he came in.. His face is red and swollen, a bruise is beginning to form below his eye. Angela gently touches his face

Angela: Oh god Jordan. What happened? your dad did this?

Jordan: yeah. I uh, went back to the house to get some clothes and stuff. He said I was abandoning him, just like mom did. He hit me before I knew it was coming.

Angela: Jordan, do not go back there, please? for me?

Jordan: I'm not going to. ok?

They meet in a kiss.

Jordan: I came here because I didn't want to be alone at the loft right now.

Angela: Oh, well you can't stay all night, but maybe for a little while you can.

They lay together on the bed, Angela holding Jordan close, as he falls asleep. (vo) I'll let him sleep for a little while, but I'll have to wake him up to go back to the loft. He sleeps so peaceful, like a little boy.(her voice trails off into sleep


Angela wakes up and looks over at the clock 6 am!

Angela shakes Jordan awake

Jordan: huh, what?

Angela: We fell asleep, you have to go now.

Jordan: whattimesit?(still sleepy)

Angela Its after 6 in the morning, my parents will be up soon, you have to go now.

Jordan(getting up)Ok ok, I'm getting up

They sneak down the stairs and kiss at the door

Angela: I'll see you later ok?

Jordan: yeah, later

Jordan walks down the street towards his car as Angela watches

Patty enters from upstairs

Patty: Angela?

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