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Chapter 16: Abused again?

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Chapter 16: Abused again?

written by ???????????????????

added on: 22 Jun 2004 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Jordan: Angela, I want to be with you. I do, it's just that....

Angela: What?

Jordan: Angela, I really care about you ok? But like there's things, that like happen, and I don't want you to be a part of it, because, your like, above it, and I don't want to drag you down...

Angela: Jordan(concern and fear in her voice)Whats going on? what things? Jordan. Look at me(she grabs his face and turns it to her)What is it?

Jordan: My dad, he used to hit me when I was little, but a couple years ago, He hit me and I threw a chair at him, he's pretty much left me alone since then, but last week...

Angela: He hit you again?

Jordan: Yeah, cause like, I told him I got suspended, we got in a huge fight, and(deep breathe)He beat the crap out of me.

Angela: Where'd he hit you?

Jordan closes his eyes a minute, then lifts up his shirt to show Angela the bruises on his ribs and chest.

Angela: Oh my god.(a single tear escapes her eye, and she gently touches the bruises, He flinches)He did this to you?

Jordan: yeah(ashamed, he pulls his shirt back down)

Angela: Jordan, don't..dont be ashamed this is not your fault.

Jordan: God, I thought this was done, when I through that chair at him, he stopped, but then...

Angela: Jordan.(leans over and kisses him) Is there anywhere else you can stay?

Jordan: I've kinda been staying at the loft.

Angela: You can't just live there you know.

Jordan: I know, but like, for now, it's alright

Angela: Is this why you haven't even calle dme this week?

Jordan: I didn't want you to see me like that

Angela: Jordan, you know, you can talk to me about this, right?

Jordan: look, Angela, it's just I don't want you to like, think...whatever...

Angela: Jordan, you need a place to stay, you wanna go talk to my parents, maybe they'd let you stay for awhile?

Jordan: No, no I can't like, they wont.

Angela: We can ask.

Jordan looks into Angela's eyes, and resigned says: ok we can try?

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You have 2 choices: What should happen next?
  1. They talk to her parents:
    Chapter 17: Living together?? by ??????? (22 Jun 2004)
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    Chapter 17: uh, I dont know???? by anonymous (23 Jun 2004)
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