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Chapter 11: Rayanne's break down

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Chapter 11: Rayanne's break down

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added on: 21 Jun 2004 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

scene starts with Rayanne in thew girls bathroom staring at herself in the mirror

Rayanne: Screwed up didn't you Raynee, typical, no you got no one. As if. Like anyone ever gave a damn anyway, they're all just people going through the revolving door of my life. (makes an annoyed face) No one will ever stick not when I was a kid , not now, not ever. Screw them, I don't need anyone. (a stall door opens and Sharon walks out Rayanne doesn't notice)

Tears begin to form and slowly fall down Rayannes face, she slowly sinks to the floor sobbing softly.

Sharon walks over to her and kneels down and hugs her

Rayanne:(fighting tears and losing): I di--didn't know anyone was in here.

Sharon: Shhhh. Rayanne go ahead, cry you deserve a good cry.

Rayanne: Th--th--thanks. Rests her head on Sharon's shoulder and cries

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    Chapter 12: Sharon Tells It Like it Is to Angela by Lexy (28 Dec 2004)
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    Chapter 12: Fix it by ????????????????????????? (21 Jun 2004)
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“School is a battlefield for your heart.”

Angela Chase, Episode 1: "My So-Called Life (Pilot)"