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Chapter 16: Nonfunctioning Drunk

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Chapter 16: Nonfunctioning Drunk

written by Rusty

added on: 05 Oct 2004 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Rayanne is drunk and on her way to see the counselor and is barely moving with Angela trying to her help

Angela: Come on Rayanne, stay with me. Come on, come on, Oh no.

Rayanne passes out, Angela tries to wake her up

Angela: Come on Rayanne, Come on Rayanne, wake up

Angela sees Brian leaving to go to the bathroom

Angela: Brian, Brian (Brian turns to look at her, sees Rayanne) Go and get help, Rayanne has passed out

Brian: Ok (starts running to the pay phone calls 911) To the operator: Yes, this is an emergency, my friend has collasped, I don't know why, send help, Liberty High School hallway

Operator: Stay on the line. How does your friend look?

Brian (to Angela): How does she look?

Angela (Yells): She's passed out

Brian: Did you hear that? She has passed out

Hears ambulance outside and paramedics coming into building

Paramedic1 to Angela: We need to get her on the strecher and on to the hospital

Angela: Ok.

Paramedics get her on the strecther and out to the aid car and they drive off

Angela (drained)talking to Brian: Whoa! I can't believe it, not even Rayanne, how could she in school of all places.

Brian: Just be grateful somebody was with her when she did this, your a great friend to her you know

Angela: Yeah, I know.

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“Ignore her. She got up on the wrong side of the coffin this morning.”

Enrique (Rickie) Vasquez, Episode 9: "Halloween"