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The Interactive FanFiction Story

One of the longest-running fanfiction stories on the 'net.

Chapter 20: Great!

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Chapter 20: Great!

written by anna

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Brian - Angela? Angela wait up!
Angela starts running and soon she realises that she's lost Brian and is in an unrecognisable and unsavory part of town.

Angela VO - Great! Now i don't know where i am! and it's getting dark. Great!

she feels her pockets for change and cires an angry sigh when she doesn't find any.tears start falling from her eyes she starts walking and soon she comes upon four guys siting around a car parked on the sidewalk. Angela recognises one of them a Shane, Jordans friend.

Angela VO - Great! this is so what i need!

the guys start wolf whistling and one of them calls to her

guy - hey sweetie! whatcha doing here? this doesn't look like your kinda neighbourhood!

Angela keeps her head down and walks quicker but they block her path.

Angela - please leave me alone! (she starts crying harder)
Shane - Chase?
Angela - Yeah?
Shane - Jordan's girl?

Angela is silent as the guys stop pushing and shoving and listen.

Shane - Jesus, u really are lost! Did he kick u out?
Angela - no
Shane - u need a lift?

Angela nods and gets into Shanes car. They drive off and soon pull up at Jordans house.

Angela - Oh!
Shane - What? Wait here, i'll go get him

Shane gets out and knocks at the door. Jordan answers and they talk.

Jordan - hey buddy! who ya got in the car? strike it lucky tonight?
Shane - man i wish but no, its your girl
Jordan - my girl?
Shane - the red head
Jordan - why is she in your car?
Shane - she got lost and she was cryin' n all
Jordan - where did ya find her?
Shane - near the wharehouse!
Jordan - man she was lost!

They walk back to the car and Angela is silent as Jordan opens the door and crouches down to talk to her.

Jordan - shane? like, go
Shane - gee sorry, i mean its only my car n' all!
Jordan - (to angela) u wanna come in?
Angela - no
Shane - well, it's either go in or come back to the loft with me!

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You have 2 choices: What should happen next?
  1. She goes inside:
    Chapter 21: the hallway by anonymous author (10 Nov 1999)
    2 more subchapters.
  2. She refuses and walks home:
    Chapter 21: Getting to know SHANE! by Melena (11 Dec 2003)
    19 more subchapters.

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Angela Chase, Episode 1: "My So-Called Life (Pilot)"