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The Interactive FanFiction Story
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Chapter 16: Parking lot
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Chapter 16: Parking lot
written by Lydia
added on: 18 Mar 2004 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman
Rayanne: Hey, angela!...Jordan.
(Rayanne, standing outside car, anglea and Jordan stay seated inside.)
Angela: Hey (shyly,smiling)
Jordan: Oh, hey.
Rayanne: So, what did you to do last night?
Angela: Where's Ricky? (shy, serous, changing subject)
(Jordan looks questioningly, almost offended a Angela and down at floor.)
(Rayanne stops, face drops slightly,realizing Angela changed the subject.)
Jordan:(distant,quiet, almost angry) Well, we better get to class or whatever. (reaches to the bacseat with one arm and pulls forward Angela's backpack.)
Rayanne: Well, I gotta find Ricky, he's hiding from Tino, and I don't know where Tino disappeared to.(smiling, seemingly fighting back tears)
Angela: (sympathetic, gentler tone)Oh, Tino was with you? (looking around, guilty)
(Rayanne stands waiting)
(Angela looks at Jordan, and down at floor.)
Rayanne: Well, I'd better go.
Angela: Yeah, well, I'll see you later.
Rayanne begins to walk away
(Jordan gets out of car.)
(Angela follows)
Angela: Wait where are you going?
(Jordan turns around silenty, avoiding eye contact but eventually look up at Angela.)
Angela: (sadly) What's the matter?
Jordan: Just-...Why didn't you-I wasn't planning on like keeping it a secret or anything.
Angela: What? Well..I wasn't. Just not Rayanne. Not right now.
Jordan: why?
Angela: (quietly) I don't know... You've been with Rayanne. (looks almost disgustedly upset at her last statement)
Jordan:I'm not ashamed... of beeing with you. Are you?
Angela: No, God. Of course not. It's just wierd.
Jordan: Weird?
Angela: I've just, I've never done this before.
(almost smiling, fighting back a smile)
Jordan:(little smile) Well, now you have. (Moving toward her)
Angela: yeah.
(He takes her in his arms, still looking at her. kisses her. Bells rings)
Angela: Oh God, we're late.
Jordan: (laughs)
(Angela makes shy, embarrassed smiling face. Jordan puts his arm around her and they walk toward the building.)
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