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Chapter 8: a choice alternative

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Chapter 8: a choice alternative

written by anonymous author

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

angela: did you ever like not want to show up for something?
jordan: what?
angela: i mean say, we didn't go to this party. you know, what if we did something else?
jordan: like what?
angela: i don't know... i mean maybe we could go to the loft or something. i mean cuz that, that song you wrote, i just like can't get it out of my head. you know?
jordan: yeah uh, we could do that. you know not go to the party.
angela: so is that ok with you?
jordan: yeah i mean its just a party...
at the loft- jordan just finishes up 'red'.
angela: thats a really good song.
jordan: yeah? cuz i haven't sung it anywhere before. i mean except for you.
angela blushes and smiles: well its good its great. great.
angela vo: i hate it when there's just like this annoying lull. where you like don't know what to say and the whole thing just turns out ot be this totally mortifying moment.
angela: so what do you want to do now?
jordan: i dunno.
angela: well maybe you could you know teach me some of your song.
jordan: you mean how to play it?
angela: well, yeah.
jordan: yeah sure.
jordan sits down next to angela and plaes the guitar in her hands. he slowly instructs her on how to play the song but she just doesn't catch on.
jordan: maybe we should stop. you know before someone calls the cops for disturbing the peace.
angela: it was that bad?
jordan: no, you're just a little... shaky.
angela: oh... shak-
jordan cuts her off as he leans over to kiss her. they smooch for awhile until a loud crash is heard. they both look up to see brian of all people.
brian: oh... i uh- i was just- i'm... i gotta- im leaving.
jordan and angela both have a puzzled look on their faces as they watch brian stumble out of the loft.
angela: that was uh... interesting.?
jordan: yeah.?

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You have 2 choices: What should happen next?
  1. angela and jordan continue kissing:
    Chapter 9: Deep Thoughts by Kate (10 Nov 1999)
    29 more subchapters.
  2. angela and jordan run after brian to see what the hell he was doing in the loft:
    Chapter 9: Oh My God, Brian! by anonymous author (10 Nov 1999)
    6 more subchapters.
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