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Chapter 11: Takes my breath away

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Chapter 11: Takes my breath away

written by Kahlan Wiles

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Angela:(VO) This is like tooo real to be happening. (They continue to kiss as Jordon lowers her to the couch). I, mean, thing don't like actully happen to me. I just constantly think about sitution that could like never possilbe happen, but this is like actully happening.
Jordon:(BReaks away from Angela and looks deeply at her) Is this like O.K with you? I mean, I can take you home if you want. Cause like I don't what to like pressure you or whatever. So if you do wanted to that's like okay and if you don't that's like okay,too.
Jordon looks at her with caring and tenderness.
Angela is so taken with this that she dosn't know how to anwser this question.
Angela:(VO)See, his doing it again. As soon as I think I like know jordon catalano, he goes and does something so wounderful it takes my breath away and I realize all over again why I fell for him in the first place. But I stil have that nagging question, should I sleep with Jordon?

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“And, you know, with your hair like that? It hurts to look at you.”

Rayanne Graff, Episode 1: "My So-Called Life (Pilot)"