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The Interactive FanFiction Story

One of the longest-running fanfiction stories on the 'net.

Chapter 12: Big deals

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Chapter 12: Big deals

written by anonymous author

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Angela: I *have* to go... I'm sorry.

Jordan drives her home, they kiss goodnight, and Angela
opens the front door.

Patty: Where the hell have you been?!

Angela: I'm so sorry, I--

Patty: Did I not say that I wanted you to stay *here*
tonight and watch after your sister?!

Angela: Mom, it's no big deal--

Patty: No big deal?!

Graham: Patty, let's just calm down...

Patty: Graham, she has zero understanding of
responsibility... I mean, Angela, we came home to find
*Brian Krakow* looking after Danielle, which was *your*
responsibility, not his.

Angela: Mom, I'm really sorry... I had to talk to Jordan,
and we just lost track of time. It won't happen again...

Patty: You bet it won't. You're grounded.

Angela, defeated, goes slowly up to her room.

Later, on the phone with Rayanne...

Angela: Rayanne, I can't just *sneak out* like that...

Rayanne: Angelika, have I not taught you anything? Of
course you can... the trick is to find just the right

Angela: Well, it's not even a big deal.. I should probably
just skip this one.

Rayanne: Angela, listen to me. Tino's party. Tonight. Big
deal. Not to mention the fact that Jordan Catalano *will* be

Angela: (smiling at this) I know...

Rayanne: Soooo... that's it, you'll be there. Righ

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“Ignore her. She got up on the wrong side of the coffin this morning.”

Enrique (Rickie) Vasquez, Episode 9: "Halloween"