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Chapter 9: Who cares what Jordon says

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Chapter 9: Who cares what Jordon says

written by Delamitri Delamore

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Ricki is standing in the hallway, copying rayannes sultry, relaxed slouch. Hes staring into space. Brian comes around the corner

Brian: Oh my god Ricki, Im so glad..I have to talk to you.

Ricki: Hey..Is this like about Jordon Catallano

Jordon comes around the corner.

Jordon: Can we like..go somewhere

Ricki: (quickly) Sure.

Cut to the band room.. Brian is standing akwardly, Jordon is sitting on the steps of the stage, smoking. Ricki has his back to them. Ricki swivals around.

Rick: Brian are you sure..I meen, could they have been doing something else...Like were you jumping to a conclusion.

Jordon: I think..

Brian: (shouting) Of course Im sure !! Ricki it was really obvious

Jordon: I think..

Ricki: Oh my god this will crush Angela. Her family are happy. And Patty too...

Jordon: Whos Patty ?

Brian: Maybe we shouldnt tell her..I meen like..maybe I shouldnt tell her. I meen shes already mad at me. Maybe you should tell her Ricki

Ricki: Are you absolutely sure Brian..

Jordon: I think..

Ricki Brian: (shout) What ?

Jordon: I think Im going tell Angela

Angela comes around the door

Angela: Tell me what

Ricki, and Brian freeze. Jordon gets up

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You have 2 choices: What should happen next?
  1. Jordon takes Angelas arm and goes off to tell her:
    Chapter 10: Fair by Michy (10 Nov 1999)
    no more subchapters.
  2. Brian blurts it out:
    Chapter 10: Telling Angela by Aikendrum (10 Nov 1999)
    6 more subchapters.

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“Do we have to keep talking about religion? It's Christmas.”

Danielle Chase, Episode 15: "So-Called Angels"