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Chapter 7: Wrong Place At The Wrong Time

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Chapter 7: Wrong Place At The Wrong Time

written by LNE

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Brian: But I could never... like tell her.... to her face I mean
Jordan: Tell her what?
Brian: (Goes off into a dream like state) That I care for her....... that I think about her and worry about her....
Jordan: (interupts) that you love her?
Brain: (pauses, then with confidence) I love her.
Jordan: She makes me think.....
Brian: huh?
Jordan: She like has *this* way..... I can't really...(pause) she makes me think about what I'm thinking. (pause) She makes me think about myself and like.(pause) my life!
(Jordan is alarmed at what he said)
Jordan: Lets go Krakow
(Both get up from the table)
Brain: I'm just gonna go to the bathroom before we go okay
Jordan: Alright
(Brain wonders through the restaurant looking for the mens room. He finds it and the door swings open suddenly as a man walks out and Brain is pushed back and stumbles through the doors of the kitchen. Graham and Hallie are in each others arms about to kiss)
Brain: Oh! Oh my God!!
(Brain runs out)
Graham: Brain!! Brain! Its not what you think.....
(Brain runs past Jordan and into the alley. Jordan follows)
Jordan: What? What is it ?

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You have 2 choices: What should happen next?
  1. Brian Tells Jordan about Graham with Hallie:
    Chapter 8: Decisions by Kali (10 Nov 1999)
    14 more subchapters.
  2. Brain does not say a word and they get back in the car:
    Chapter 8: to tell or not to tell by ? (10 Nov 1999)
    7 more subchapters.

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