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Chapter 11: Betryed by Jordan saved by Brain...AGAIN!

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Chapter 11: Betryed by Jordan saved by Brain...AGAIN!

written by kristen

added on: 25 Jul 2004 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Angela gets into Jordan's car, and looks at Brian on his bike, just standing there. Jordan gets into the car.

Jordan: We should talk.
Angela: ( very low, still in awe of Brian) Yeah...
Jordan: Angela. I'm real sorry. Hopefully that letter let you know how I feel.
Angela: YOU! God Jordan, are you just going to keep lying to me? Or what?
Jordan: I don't understand...
Angela: I know okay, about the letter, about Brian.
Jordan: Look...Angela...I'm sorry...let's go back to my place and, like, talk or something.
Angela: Fine...That's actually fine.

Cut to Jordan's place. Angela and Jordan sit on his couch.
Jordan pushes Angela down and kisses her. Angela lets him, but Jordan refuses to let up. He starts to pull Angelas clothing off. Angela tries to break away.

Angela: Stop! Please!
Jordan stops
Jordan: Is'nt this what you wanted.
Angela: No this is not what I wanted. Get off of me!
Jordan: Please Angela! I waited so long....
Angela: God!

A knock comes from the front door.

Jordan yells "come in!"

A short blonde girl walks in, wearing tight jeans and a t-shirt.

Blonde girl: Jordan I'm here.
Angela: I can't believe you! God Jordan, I should've stayed with Brian.

Angela storms out of the room.She walks back to her house on the verge of tears.

When she got back to her house she noticed a light coming from the tree in front of Brian's house.

Angela: Brian! Brian! Is that you?

Brian looks down and sees Angela, he climbs down.

Brian: So, hows everything with Jordan?

Angela: Forget about Jordan. Let's talk about US. Brian.....what you wrote...was so profound...i never felt so special.....do you really feel that way?
Brian: Yeah! i do Okay! (softly) I do. I really do.
Angela: Do what?
Brian: (hesitantly) i love you angela.
Angela: Until now I never realized how much I love you too,

Brian and Angela go for a walk and start kissing.

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    Chapter 12: You're not the only one by Sparkykat100 (12 Nov 2004)
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“Ignore her. She got up on the wrong side of the coffin this morning.”

Enrique (Rickie) Vasquez, Episode 9: "Halloween"