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Chapter 12: A Reversed Universe

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Chapter 12: A Reversed Universe

written by Huie

added on: 16 Aug 2004 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Jordan slowly walks up to Angela and Nick, the couple still lost in each other. He stands looking at them for a while. His face is extremley hard to read. He looks confused, hurt, shocked, disgusted, sad, and numb all at once. Finally he speaks.

Jordan- (Faintly, but loud enough to be heard over the music.) Hey guys... (pauses) so what are you doing?

Hearing the fimilar voice, Angela and Nick uburptly part. Nick wipes his lips, while Angela does her hair tuck.

Nick- (Acting as though nothing has happened) Hey, Jordan.

Jordan- (rudley) Oh I'm sorry..., was I inturpting something...?

He looks at them for a while. Then his attention focuses on Angela. She is silently crying to herself.

Jordan- I can't beleive you... that you could do this to me... what you just did is exactly what I've been trying to pay for, for like, ever. (In a whigning, hurt manner) We are together Angela.

With that he walks away. Angela tries to pull him back, but he shakes his arm loose. Nick gives Angela a shrug. She quickly looks at him in disgust. Disgust of his actions, and disgust with herself. She finally walks away, totally absentmindingly.

Fades to black

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“Ignore her. She got up on the wrong side of the coffin this morning.”

Enrique (Rickie) Vasquez, Episode 9: "Halloween"