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The Interactive FanFiction Story

One of the longest-running fanfiction stories on the 'net.

Chapter 16: awkward car conversation

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Chapter 16: awkward car conversation

written by ?

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Angela: uh, no... I kinda... want to, you know. just walk.

Jordan:oh, well. whatever.

Jordan starts to close the door as it starts to rain harder.

Jordan: you sure?

Angela tries to pull her jacket over her head, but the rain seems to only get stronger. She stands there getting wet trying to think of a good reason to refuse, after a while she smiles.

Angela: uh, maybe I better.

she gets in, closing the door behind her. she pops her head out of her jacket. Her makeup is slightly smeared, and her face is all wet. She can't help but smile as Jordan watches her.

Angela: maybe I should of just stayed outside... I couldn't get any wetter.

Jordan: that's true.

they sit there awkwardly, the car engine and the rain the only sounds. Jordan hits the wipers and they squeek every so often.

Jordan: but. I. I wanted you to get in. it's just that... you're just about the only thing that gets me through. you know, the day.

Angela looks up. but Jordan is concentrating on the road.

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You have 2 choices: What should happen next?
  1. Jordan drops her off, just as the bus pulls away from their street.:
    Chapter 17: lateral vision by ? (10 Nov 1999)
    1 more subchapter.
  2. Angela decides to give Jordan another chance:
    Chapter 17: ? by anonymous author (10 Nov 1999)
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