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Chapter 8: Moving on

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Chapter 8: Moving on

written by anonymous author

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Angela pushes Jordan away.

Angela:No.You can't just kiss me and expect everything to

be ok.Because it's not.

Jordan:(looking annoyed)I thought you said the issue with me and,you know,Rayanne was resolved.

Angela:It is Sort of.It's just that........I can't do this anymore.Go on this emotional rollercoaster with you and hope that it ends up different than the last times.I think that it's time for both of us to move on.

Jordan:(looks confused)You're breaking up with me before we even got back together?

Angela:I just can't do this anymore.

Jordan:Whatever.You know,I really don't get you.

Angela:(looks uncomfortable)No.I guess you don't.
(Angela gets out of the car)


Brian walking to Advanced Trig

BrianVO: Of course.Of course she picked Jordan over me.Why wouln't she?I was stupid to even think things were gonna change between us.

Brian bumps in to Delia Fisher.Her books fall to the ground.

(Brian picked up her books)

(Delia gives him an evil look and walks away.Brian follows)

Brian:Are you ever gonna give up this stupid grudge against me?

Delia:You think it's stupid?Yoou really hurt me ,you know.

Brian:(looking down at his feet )I know.I'm really sorry.

Delia:(Sarcasm) Oh,really?

Brian: will you hear me out?

Delia considers than nods reluctantly

Brian:I acted like A jerk.You don't deserve that...Give me a chance to prove I not like that.

Delia:(slowly smiling)I'm listening.

BrianVO:Come it.Ask her out on a date.You don't have a chance with Angela.

Brian: let me take you to a movie.Please?


Angela looking around for Brian

AngelaVo:I have to tell Brian we broke up before the bell rings.I can't let any guy who writes a poem like that pass by.

She spots Brian talking to Delia

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    Chapter 9: Judgement Day by anonymous author (10 Nov 1999)
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Enrique (Rickie) Vasquez, Episode 9: "Halloween"