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Chapter 11: Making Amends

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Chapter 11: Making Amends

written by anonymous author

added on: 21 Jun 2000 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Brian dials a number and waits as it rings

DELIA: Hello?
Brian open's his mouth to speak but loses his nerve.
DELIA: Hello? Is anyone like, there?

BRIAN: Hello, is this Delia?

DELIA: Yeah...Um, who's this?

BRIAN: Delia? It's Brian. Brian Krakow?

DELIA: (coldly) Oh.

BRIAN: I know that I have like, no right to call you...

DELIA: That's right. You don't.

BRIAN: And I wouldn't blame you if you wanted to like, hang up on me but--

DELIA: Brian? What do you want? I'm like, busy.

BRIAN: I was calling because...well I wanted to, I don't know, like...I mean, I think that I should...apologize.

DELIA: You want to apologize?

BRIAN: I know you are probably like, over it now...but I was just thinking like, how heartless I was...you know, about the dance and stuff. And you like, totally didn't deserve it.

DELIA: I don't...wow.

BRIAN: And I don't like, expect you to forgive me or anything. Because like, I did an...undefendable thing. I was like, careless with your heart.

DELIA: Brian...I'm like...totally surprised. But like...thanks. I needed to hear that. You like, really hurt me.

BRIAN: I didn't know I had that power. That I could like, actually hurt someone.

DELIA: Well you did.

BRIAN (VO) I hated myself right then. Life was such a cruel joke.

DELIA: Well anyway Brian.. I like, have to go. I have to babysit in like, 5 minutes.

BRIAN: Oh really? yeah, okay..but...um...

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“Ignore her. She got up on the wrong side of the coffin this morning.”

Enrique (Rickie) Vasquez, Episode 9: "Halloween"