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Chapter 13: the gun shot

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The story so far

• Chapter 1: How It Ended by Winnie Holzman
• Chapter 2: Red-Haired Juliet by Nieske
• Chapter 3: Who's a Horny Little Toad? by anonymous author
• Chapter 4: Forgiveness by anonymous author
• Chapter 5: You love me? by Erin
• Chapter 6: Jordan finally expresses emotion by anonymous author
• Chapter 7: yes by anonymous author
• Chapter 8: Party Life Ain't That Great by Kate
• Chapter 9: the woods by sarah
• Chapter 10: Things That Go Bump In the Night by anonymous author
• Chapter 11: Wow, my two favourite people! by Judi
• Chapter 12: Darkness Falls by Joie

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Chapter 13: the gun shot

written by Eliza

added on: 05 Jul 2002 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

In the woods

Paul- Hey Ray, what do you think your doing?
RG- What am I doing? What does it look like I am doing? I'm standing in a forrest pointing a gun in your face. Or did you think I was up to something eles.
AC- What did you do? (she leans down to Jordan who has still not woken up)
Paul- Hey Ray, why don't you give me the gun. Come on, this has nothing to do with you. Give me the GUN!
AC- Rayanne NO!
RG- (looks at Jordan and Angela Paula takes this chance to run towards her. Rayanne shots the gun. Paul is shot in the side)
Paul- (Paul falls to the ground) What is wrong with you?!
RG- There is nothing wrong with me.
AC- Jordan, you have to wake up. JORDAN!(Angela runs her fingers though his hair and touches a large gash. The blood runs down her fingers)Rayanne!
RG- I shot him!
AC- Rayanne (Angela is crying. She tires to pick up Jordan but he is to heavy) Help me!

In a hospital room. Angela's parents knock on the door

AC- Mommy? (She opens the door. Angela is covered in Jordan's blood and dirt from the woods)
PC- Are you O.K? (looks over and see Jordan)Oh my god, is he ok?
AC- I dont know yet.

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