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Chapter 12: Darkness Falls

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Chapter 12: Darkness Falls

written by Joie

added on: 24 May 2001 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman


ANGELA: (nervous.) What was that?

RAYANNE: I dunno. Probably Catalano and Dumbdumb having a fight. They better quit it, I'm freezing out here. (calls.) Hey, you guys! Quit it!

ANGELA: What if something happened to them?

RAYANNE: (tsk.) Angelika, nothing happened to them, okay?

ANGELA: Rayanne, why was there only one shout, if they're fighting?

RAYANNE: (shrug.) Maybe Dumbdumb shot Catalano. Though I suppose he'd be screaming then. I dunno. (RAYANNE sees ANGELA's face.) Relax, Angela, I'm joking. He doesn't even have his gun on him.

ANGELA: How do you know?

(RAYANNE holds up a silver pistol. ANGELA looks relieved and scared.)

RAYANNE: What, you wanna go see?

ANGELA: How can we- we can't, it's too dark.

RAYANNE: There's a flashlight in the back of this car. I get the impression dumby comes to the woods a lot.

ANGELA: For wh- oh.

RAYANNE: Well, it's stay here and wait, or go see. It's up to you, I'm easy either way.

ANGELA: Maybe we should go check.


(RAYANNE gets the flashlight from the car. They set off through the WOODS.)

ANGELA: Rayanne, I don't like this, maybe we should go back.

RAYANNE: Angelfood, we're still on the path, it's okay.


(RAYANNE and ANGELA come to a clearing. JORDAN lies there, knocked out cold.)

ANGELA: Oh my God! Ohmygod, ohmygod, ohmygod...

RAYANNE: Angela! Snap out of it, geez! Quiet, for a second.

(ANGELA freezes. BOTH listen. A twig snaps behind them. RAYANNE pulls the gun, BOTH spin around. Standing in front of them is:

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