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Chapter 7: drowning

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Chapter 7: drowning

written by anonymous author

added on: 27 Dec 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

jordan drives off into the unknown, he turns his car radio up loud, as if to drown out is thoughts.

angela walks slowly up to her door, in tears.

brian is, like always, in the street, cricling on his bike...

BRIAN: angela, she doesnt respond. ANGELA..

ANGELA: she turns around, her face drowned in tears...what brian, what is it this time !

BRIAN: i just wanted to see if you were like, ok?

ANGELA: i'm fine ok ! im like,......fine. she slumps onto her doorstep and sobs for the whole world to hear.
BRIAN voiceover, ..when i see people cry, it doesnt seem real or soemthing..like its all a movie, you feel obliged to be like, dramatical or soemthing.
ANGELA voice over: when a person cries they are like so vulnerable. if sudam hussein walked by right now i think i'd let him comfort me.

brian stands and watches her as jordan pulls up to the curb and runs out of his car towards angela.

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    Chapter 8: Love or Lust? by kristen (24 Jul 2004)
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    Chapter 8: jordan and angela...a night together. by samantha (27 Feb 2000)
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“Ignore her. She got up on the wrong side of the coffin this morning.”

Enrique (Rickie) Vasquez, Episode 9: "Halloween"