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The Interactive FanFiction Story

One of the longest-running fanfiction stories on the 'net.

Chapter 8: Revelation

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Chapter 8: Revelation

written by Matt

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

ANGELA: Um--(softly so her mother doesn't hear) I'm sorry, but I can't. My ...father...
wants me to take the bus.

JORDAN: (a little hurt and confused) Oh, okay. Whatever.

ANGELA: I'll see you later.

JORDAN: (Walking away) Whatever.

A few minutes later Angela goes to the bus stop where Brian is waiting.
Brian tries, unsuccessfully, not to look uncomfortable.

ANGELA: (smiles, a little uncomfortable herself) Hi.


They stand in uncomfortable silence. Brian thinks, then opens his
schoolbag and hands Angela her atlas.

BRIAN:'s your atlas. I didn't really need it.

ANGELA: You didn't? Then why did you borrow it?

BRIAN: (Works up his courage) I--I was going to tell you
something, but I..I chickened out.

ANGELA: (Becoming interested) What? What were you going to tell

BRIAN: (pushes himself) That I...that I *love* you Angela...
that I've always loved you.

ANGELA: (Shocked, says in small, touched voice) Oh, Brian...

Suddenly, the bus shows up.

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“Ignore her. She got up on the wrong side of the coffin this morning.”

Enrique (Rickie) Vasquez, Episode 9: "Halloween"