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Chapter 11: Like..a couple or something

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Chapter 11: Like..a couple or something

written by Delamitri Delamore (AKA KF )

added on: 10 Nov 1999 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Brian VO: I used to wonder wheather 'normal' people from like 'normal' families, walked through life without having to worry. Worry how they looked, or wheather they said 'Hi', or 'Hey'. Wheather underneath they were all pretending really found it that easy.

Brian and Angela kiss. Its sweet and soft and gradualy grows more passionate. After a moment Angela breaks away from Brian, still leaning her head against his.

Angela: (Breathless) Brian..That was amazing.

Brian VO: When Angela Chase said those four little words, I suddenly knew the answer. That it was like 'possible' to just feel, and not for like one second..think.

Brian and Angela kiss again, and this time niether brakes away.

Cut to the next day at school.Brian is putting books in his locker. He appearence hasnt changed, but for once he looks happy.

Rayanne: Hey Krackow. You seen Angela ?

Brian: (He actualy smiles) Yeh..She like in the bathroom. I think shell be out in a second.

Rayanne gives Brian a wierd look.

Rayanne: Whats up Krackow ? Actualy being civil..Are you like mentaly ill ? (Knocks on his head) Or maybe cured. (She smiles and plays with her bubblegum).

Angela comes around to Brians locker, turns him around by the collar and kisses him full on. They pull away and laugh a little, looking into each others eyes. Rayanne is rooted to the spot, an utterly astonished expression on her face.
Angela turns from Brian and gives Rayanne a hug.

Angela: Hey. (Turns to Brian) Ill see you..(wicked smile) later... (She does the infamous hair tuck and half runs, half skips off). Brian closes his lock. His grin could open Aladins cave.

Brian: (To Rayanne) Later. (Walks off sort of swaggering, sort of floating).

Rayanne remains rooted to the spot. Ricki walks up and kisses her on the cheek.

Rayanne: Pinch me.

We see Jordon Catallano in the backround, watching Brian walk away...He hasnt seen the kiss.

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You have 2 choices: What should happen next?
  1. Angela tells Jordon:
    Chapter 12: "Just Forget About Us." by Jessica Hayden (15 Sep 2001)
    no more subchapters.
  2. Brian writes Angela a poem:
    Chapter 12: the one written for her, not a car by Cookie (21 Feb 2000)
    no more subchapters.

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