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Chapter 9: Evasion

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Chapter 9: Evasion

written by Joie

added on: 20 Nov 2001 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

(The Chase car drives up. PATTY and DANIELLE get out.)

PATTY: (to ANGELA) Hi sweetheart. (to BRIAN) Hi Brian.


DANIELLE: Hey Brian.

BRIAN: Um, hi.

(PATTY opens the boot, starts taking some groceries out, hands them to DANIELLE.)

DANIELLE: Mom, these are too heavy!

PATTY: Well, take them inside quickly then.

(DANIELLE slouches sulkily off.)

PATTY: (to ANGELA) Angela, can you take some of these.


(PATTY and ANGELA exit inside with the groceries.)


(PATTY and ANGELA set the groceries down. ANGELA stops her mother.)

ANGELA: Um, Mom?


ANGELA: Um... (nervous laugh) Brian Krakow, um, asked me if I wanna go the movies, with him, but, see... I just don't feel like it, but I don't wanna hurt his feelings. If I ask you, outside, if I can go, can you ... make up an excuse? Please?

PATTY: W-- Angela? Why don't you want to go?

ANGELA: I'm just not in the mood. Please, Mom.

PATTY looks at ANGELA's pleading face, then says:

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