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Chapter 10: Cold Facts

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Chapter 10: Cold Facts

written by Joie

added on: 03 Nov 2000 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

(INT.BATHROOM-HOUSE.NIGHT)

(Behind the shower curtain are Corey and Holly Galanoy, both getting very wet and cold. RICKIE's face falls, but no one notices He leans past RAYANNE and turns the shower off)

RICKIE: Oh, sorry. We were, just...like. Leaving. Sorry.

COREY: My shoes!

RICKIE: Rayanne, you ruined his shoes!

RAYANNE: (laughs a bit) Oh my God Corey, I'm, like, totally sorry. I thought you were, like, someone else.

HOLLY: I am, like, totally freezing! God, I'm just, like.... (Gets out of bath, storms off)

COREY: Holly...

RAYANNE: Holly...

RICKIE: Holly.

COREY: (to RAYANNE and RICKIE) Thanks a lot. Thanks a heap!

RAYANNE: Don't worry Corey. She'll like, cool down. In fact, I'd say she's pretty freezing now. (giggles)

RICKIE: We are, like, totally sorry. (to RAYANNE) This isn't funny. (to COREY) We'll be, like, going now.

(RAYANNE and RICKIE exit, RICKIE holding RAYANNE up. COREY stares after them, still in bath)

RICKIE: Thanks Rayanne. So if he, like, didn't notice me before, now he doesn't even like me.

RAYANNE: Well, Rickie, face facts. I mean, he wasn't exactly beating your door down before, was he?

RICKIE: Why is that a great comfort Rayanne?

RAYANNE: Coz it's true?

RICKIE: (sad, almost to himself) Yeah, that must be it.

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