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Chapter 8: Been Thinking About You

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Chapter 8: Been Thinking About You

written by Joie

added on: 28 Nov 2000 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

COREY: (unsure) Sure, no problem. I mean, uh, where do you lived?

RAYANNE: (giggles) Aren't you just a bundle of laughs? Where do you live? (beat) Where do I live Rickie?

RICKIE : (sigh, to COREY) It's a duplex. Flat A, on Westlake street. Her keys will be in her bag somewhere, you'll probably have to, you know, help her in. (COREY looks nervous) Are you sure you don't want me to drop her home?

COREY : Uh, well, act-

RAYANNE : God Rickie, he said he would, okay. Stop messing in my life.

RICKIE : (annoyed) Fine. I'm going. (to COREY) Bye. (Exit)

RAYANNE : He's so uptight. God.

(COREY stares after RICKIE, looks at RAYANNE, who giggles and drinks. COREY sighs)


AVO: I must have done something really bad in a past life. Like, something so bad? That everytime I get a shot at happiness in this life, its snatched away. In a way that's worse than never knowing happiness. To have it and then lose it.

(ANGELA changes the CD. "Thinking About You", by Radiohead, comes on)

MUSIC : "Been thinking about you, the way I cut your hair, your eyes are on my wall, your teeth are over there, but I'm still no one, and you're my star, what do you care?"

AVO: And now my life is back where it was when this all began. I'm angry with Rayanne, for something which isn't really her fault, I don't know where I stand with Jordan, and Brian...Brian is just...ugh!


MONTAGE: MUSIC plays over


MUSIC: "Been thinking about you, and there's no rest, should I still love you, still see you in bed, but I'm playing with myself, and what do you care, when the other men are far, far better"

(BRIAN lies on his bed, looking depressed)


MUSIC: All the things you got, you'll never need, brought you cigarettes, and pried the company to come and see you honey.

(RAYANNE is having a ball, drinking and dancing. COREY dances too, he looks vaguely worried)


MUSIC: "Been thinking about you, so how can you sleep, these people aren't your friends, they pay to kiss your feet, they don't know what I know, and why should you care, when I'm not there?"

(RICKIE sits in the backseat, looking very worried)


MUSIC: All the things you've got, you'll never need, all the things you've got, I pain and I bleed to please you.

(RICKIE gets out of the car, goes into the appartment)


MUSIC: Been thinking about you...

(ANGELA stares at the letter)


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“Ignore her. She got up on the wrong side of the coffin this morning.”

Enrique (Rickie) Vasquez, Episode 9: "Halloween"