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Chapter 7: true feeling

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Chapter 7: true feeling

written by anonymous author

added on: 27 Dec 2005 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

JORDAN PULLS UP AGAIN AT ANGELAS HOUSE, ANGELA GOES OUT TO TALK TO HIM.
ANGELA WALKS OVER TO HIS CAR, HE JUST SITS IN THE DRIVERS SEAT LOOKING OUT THE WINDOW , NOT AT ANGELA,

ANGELA:hey jordan
JORDAN STILL NOT LOOKING AT HER.
JORDAN:YEAH
ANGELA:look i just...i think i, like need to talk to you?...
JORDAN:why are u always like this,
ANGELA:like what??
JORDAN:like...how you are , why cant you speak your mind, like express...yourself without all this!..
ANGELA:all this what???
JORDAN:just say it angela!!
ANGELA:what, i CANT do this not with you anymore, just NO, okay you cant just treat me like this, and if you dont like the situation just drive off in your car!!!(angerly)
JORDAN:so...break up with me,
ANGELA:omg...i can not believe you!!
why are you here why'd you come back...,
JORDAN:i know why your like this...its him, that guy i always see u with, that kid that tutors me brain.
ANGELA:WHAT! god your so ...and by the way his name is BRIAN.
JORDAN:i gotta go,
ANGELA:you cant just go, like leave me , here not knowing where we stand.
JORDAN STARTS HIS CAR!
ANGELA:jordan!,
JORDAN:i said i gotta go, like really...go for good this time,
DRIVES OFF LEAVING ANGELA STANDING THERE.
BRIAN, WALKS OUT OFF HIS HOUSE AND GETS OUT HIS BIKE, DOSENT SEE ANGELA JUST THERE ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE STREET, LOOKS UP,

ANGELA: h'ey
BRIAN:hey
ANGELA:like going out...
ANGELAVO:iam always doing this pointing out the obvious, asking guestions i like already know , the answers too!, even in like situations like this.
BRIAN: uhh, yeah (looks at her)
BRIAN:so r u like okay, or whatever,
ANGELA: mhmm...(she mumbles softly)
BRIAN:rite y'a,,okay than (he says while wheeling his bike on to the street)
ANGELA: so ...like jordan i uknow its over, i broke up with him.
ANGELAVO: why do i say things like that,that are like compleatly none of other peoples buisness, but i say it anyway, like for reasurence,or sumthing.
BRIAN:y'a, thats like...whatever
ANGELA SHOCKED HE DOSENT REALLY CARE
BRIAN:well gotta go...later chase
ANGELA WALKS BACK TO HER HOUSE, GOES INSIDE ANDWALKS UP TO HER ROOM FLOPES ON HER BED AND LYES THERE.

ANGELAVO: i cannot belive this, i just broke up with jordan, and i cant stop thinking about brian, like, i filled my mind with all this stuff that wasnt even importint, with jordan. and now brian is like the only one on my mind, like how he writes me this letter, that is soo amazing....(dazes off with a smile)laughs a little (outloud says...) omg why iam i like this... and than he dosent even care, to like get into a conversation about it, or how i...,or about my like... wait why do i suddenly care about what brian thinks, or knows, or feels.
mabey i should tell him about how i feel, ANGELA GETS UP GRABBES A PIECE OF PAPER OUT OF HER BAG AND A PEN. AND STARTS TO WRITE ON HER BED.

DEAR BRIAN,
I LOVED UR LETTER, AND I, NEVER READ ANYTHING MORE AMAZING IN MY LIFE, FROM ANYONE, AND I WANT YOU TO KNOW HOW I FEEL, BUT I DONT EVEN LIKE THINK THERES A WORD FOR IT, LIEK THESE FEELINGS DONT MAKE SENCE OR SOMETHING, AND I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT, OUT OF ALL THE PEOPLE I KNOW, OR'VE KNOWN, I REALLY LIKE THINK, YOU KNOW ME BETTER THAN I LIKE EVEN KNOW MYSELF, YOU ARE SO AMAZING BRIAN.
-ANGELA

ANGELA SMILES
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~next day at liberty high school~~~~~~~~~~~
ANGELAS WALKING DOWN THE HALL,STOPS TO TALK TO CHERISKI,
ANGELA:hey
sharon:oh, angela hi
ANGELA:so..like whats up
ANGELA LEANS AGAINST SHARONS LOOKER LOOKING OVER AT BRIAN WHOS FACED THE OTHER WAY GETTING BOOKS OUT OF HIS LOCKER, ANGELAS NOT REALLY PAYING ANY ATTENTION TO SHARON.
SHARON:oh you know nothing,AS SHE DOES UP HER BACKPACK,
ANGELA:somthing has happend...
SHARON GRABBING HER BOOKS
SHARON:ya, its kyle , you will not believe him hes all like, i mean, its like if you dont wanna give me a ride because you have football practice, Dont, i mean god!
NOTICING ANGELA'S NOT PAYING ATTENTION AS SHE STARES AT BRIAN FROM ACROSS THE HALL,
ANGELA IN A DAZE
ANGELA:what?
SHARON smiles,
SHARON:so angela...hows brian?
ANGELA SNAPES OUT OF HE DAZE AT THE SOUND OF BRIANS NAME,
ANGELA:WHAT?
SHARON:no, nothing,...smiles, so what you like him or something?
ANGELA:I...WHAT NO,
AS BRIAN WALKS BY ,HER EYES FOLLOW HIM.
SHARON SEES THIS.
SHARON:look i see how your looking at him, so what happend?(smiles)
ANGELA:no, nothing happened, i just,(feels that she can confide in sharon, cuz she like ahs to tell someone)
he gave me this letter, and i like, sharon it was so amazing like you wouldnt believe,
SHARON:SMILES
SHARON:yeah?...well its about time
ANGELA:what
SHARON:we its so obvious ! hes like loved you for ages! its about time he like pointed out the obvious,.(smiles)
ANGELA:o.m.g sharon, i cant like explain how it feels, how i feel, now that, i mean u cant even believe to understand...(she said softly and intreging)
SHARON SEES KYLE WALK BY... WITH A BUNCH OF ROWDY FOOTBALL GUYS.
SHARON:yeah...(she says dissapointed) i cant.
SHARON:so ... (looking back at angela)what are you gunna do?..seeing how you relising you love him
ANGELA:what no i dont!...love brian, god,
BELL RINGS
SHARON:ya.. whatever
STARTS TO WALK OFF SMILEING
ANGELA:do...I
SHARON:arnt you comming to class??
ANGELA:ya wait i gotta do something first,
SHE PULLS THE LETTER OUT OF HER BAG , AND SLIPS IT INTO BRIANS LOCKER.
~~~~~~~~AFTER SCHOOL~~~~~~~
BRIAN WALKS OUT OF CLASS , GOES TO HIS LOCKER TO GET HIS BAG AND STUFF, FINDS THE LETTER THROWS IT IN HIS BAG AND LEAVES.
~~~~~~AT BRIANS HOUSE, IN HIS ROOM DOIND ADVANCED CALCLUS ~~~HE FINDS THE LETTER,
BRIAN :WHAT THE HELL,
brian starts to read it,
we see an amazed look on his face,
SCENE SWITCHES TO ANGELA SITTING OUTSIDE HER HOUSE ON A SWINGING CHAIR THINGY, OR HER PORTCH...THINKING.
BRIAN WALKS OVER TO HER SLOWLY SHE LOOKS UP TO SEE, HIM AND SMILES, HE SITS DOWN,
ANGELA:hey
BRIAN HAS THE LETTER SHE GAVE HIM IN HIS HAND,
BRIAN JUST SMILES SLIGHTLY
ANGELA:so...brian i know it like makes no sence i just i..
BRIAN LOOKS DOWN .
ANGELA: brian...
BRIAN:y'eah...
ANGELA:what are u thinking,
ANGELAVO:although i like know, i just knew, like brian is so hard to figure out, but know everything just became clear.
BRIAN: so...like this letter is ,it that you have pitty on me or something...because i like really dont (low voice) understand...
ANGELA:brian no, i,
BRIAN:because i thought you choose...(tearey eyed)...him,(brian looks up tune starts to play in the back round)(udunn,anahh)
ANGELA:brian, i had all these feeling, and i cant stop thinking about it.. about the letter...about YOU brian.
BRIANlooks into her eyes,she looks back at his,
ANGELAvo:his eyes were baby blue , i could of stared at them forever,
BRIAN:yeah...
ANGELA STILL LOOKING AT HIM
ANGELA:yeah,
ANGELAVO:i could have kissed him, i could have anything'd him, i felt like so in love with him.
BRIAN SMILES THEY CATCH EACH OTHERS GLANCES AGAIN , LOOK INTO EACH OTHERS EYES AGAIN.
BRIAN:well i should ,probably go
ANGELA:uhh, yeah
here eyes watching him as he nodds, and gets up.
HE WALKS BACKWARDS , STARING AT ANGELA AS HE WALKS AWAY, THAN TURNS AROUND, AND STARTS ACROSS THE STREET.
AS THEY BOTH LOOK AS IF THEIR WAITING 4 SOMETHING TO HAPPEN...
ANGELA:brian!
HE TURNS AROUND, SHE RUNS UP TO HIM, (ITS NOW DARK OUT SIDE, THEIR SELVES ONLY LIT UP BY THE LIGHT OF THE STREET LIGHTS)
SSHE LOOKS AT HIM, AND THEY BEGIN TO KISS GENTLY AT FIRST AND THAN AS SHE PULL HER SELVE CLOSER TO HIM,
ANGELAVO:his shrit smelt like amazing...he smelt amazing.
AS THEY BOTH LET GO,ANGELA LOOKS BACK UP AT HIM, SHE CAN HARDLY BREATH SHES SO AMAZED, EATHER CAN HE, THERE BOTH LIKE STROKE WITHA LIGHTNIG BOLT OF LOVE THAT EITHER CAN EXPLAIN.
BRIAN:angela..
ANGELA:brian
ANGELA:i..just
BRIAN:no its ...
ANGELA: I gotta like go(smiles)
BRIAN:yeah uhh, me too
THEY BOTH WALK IN OPPISITE DIRECTIONS, AND THAN ANGELA LOOKS BACK AT HIM, HE TURNS AT THE SAME TIME, SHE SMILES.





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