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Chapter 8: The Triangle Tightens....

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Chapter 8: The Triangle Tightens....

written by Sunta M-K

added on: 11 Jul 2001 - based on characters created by Winnie Holzman

Jordan unwraps the cookie, closes the locker door, and begins to walk down the hallway to the school exit, with the cookie in hand, and a sweet smile on his face.

When he arrives in the parking lot, he sees Angela talking to Brian, thinking nothing of it, he slowly begins to walk towards them.

BK: I can't believe you took him back - just like that - it's,like, really pathetic. You always think I am always going to just be here waiting for you, when the truth is I am so sick of your obsession with Jordan Catalano.

AC: Brian, you I are friends. (Her voice squeeks, her head is down, staring at her black boots). We are better as friends - you know that...

BK: Yeah, right. Like we are such good friends. All year you have been blowing me off - and I am really sick of it - (Brian is visibly uncomfortable, and his eyes begin to tear)now finally you know where I stand. (He begins to lean in closer to Angela - picking her chin up with his left hand, and ran his right hand through her crimson hair).

JC is visible in the background of this shot, he is still walking towards them. When he sees Brian's tender touch to Angela's face, the act causes Jordan to stop in mid-step.

Jordan turns his head, as if to see if anyone else is witnessing this -

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Rayanne Graff, Episode 1: "My So-Called Life (Pilot)"