HELP!!!!!!!

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ilovemyboo
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HELP!!!!!!!

Post by ilovemyboo » Oct 24th 2004, 6:27 pm

im trying to write a fanfiction right now, and i have a pretty good amount to it so far but i was wondering if anybody would be interested in helping me on it or HECK even reading it. so if your interested let me know i could REALLY use the help
thanks


ps: ow ya by the way the story takes place ten years later and it deals with jordan becoming a musicain and what happens when angela meets up with him again
MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE
"forget about those dirty looks, the photographs your boyfriend took"(giggle giggle giggle)
"this isn't a fashion statement, ITS A FU***** DEATH WISH"
"Say goodbye to the hearts you break and all the cyanid you drank"
*dancing is like camping ....... It's in tents

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wicked
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Post by wicked » Oct 25th 2004, 9:46 am

I'd be happy to beta it for you if you'd like.
You can email me at
wicked.dollz @gmail.com
( remembr the dot between wicked& dollz and remove the spaces, that just stops web crawlers from getting the email addy)
"So this is hell. I'd never have believed it. You remember all we were told about the torture-chambers, the fire and brimstone, the "burning marl." Old wive's tales! There's no need for red-hot pokers. HELL IS - OTHER PEOPLE!"

like_really
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Beta

Post by like_really » Oct 25th 2004, 11:51 am

I can read it too if you'd like.
My email is syonkey@excite.com

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Post by Lizka » Oct 25th 2004, 4:52 pm

Sign me up too.

LadyLizka@gmail.com

murfdurf22
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wassup ilovemyboo i wanna help too

Post by murfdurf22 » Oct 25th 2004, 6:21 pm

hey wassup this is murfdurf22 aka michelle in the interactice story thingy's, i'd love to read your story or help you or whatever. So you can send it to Amerie_murf22@yahoo.com. I know i told you that i had a fanfiction number 20 story or whatever, i was gonna put it out but i decided to make some changes so forgive me on that one. Anyway, if my e-mail don't show up right on this thing cuz sometimes these websites be trippin about that stuff, anyway if it don't show up right, theres a capitalized dash between Amerie and murf, NOT the long dash that go up and down but the one that go across. well thats all, i can't wait to read your story cuzzin!

luv yah
-Amerie aka Murf

ilovemyboo
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thanks

Post by ilovemyboo » Oct 25th 2004, 7:15 pm

thanks you guys ill type it up as soon as possible and sends to to yas :D
MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE
"forget about those dirty looks, the photographs your boyfriend took"(giggle giggle giggle)
"this isn't a fashion statement, ITS A FU***** DEATH WISH"
"Say goodbye to the hearts you break and all the cyanid you drank"
*dancing is like camping ....... It's in tents

TooCool4Skool
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ME TOO!

Post by TooCool4Skool » Nov 2nd 2004, 6:24 pm

I want to read it too! :BIG:

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Moltar- Well hey, Thom asked me if he could see my knife, and Thom's doing a song about knife, and he wanted to see what one looked like. Isn't that right Thom? (Pulls out knife again)
Space Goast- (Turns to Thom Yorke) Is that right?
Thom- ...No.
Space Goast- Cuz it sounds like a good idea... so do it.

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Post by Nothingman » Nov 2nd 2004, 6:46 pm

That is a hideous post. Thanks for thinking of the visualy impared, but spare us the size 18 text and the giant emoticons.
"To come to your senses, you must first go out of your mind." - Alan Watts

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Post by EchelonFan » Nov 3rd 2004, 10:03 pm

hey send me one too. Echelonsoldier89@aol.com
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Post by Jody Barsch* » Nov 4th 2004, 9:09 pm

Nothingman wrote:That is a hideous post. Thanks for thinking of the visualy impared, but spare us the size 18 text and the giant emoticons.
I think this is maybe my favorite post
Last edited by Jody Barsch* on Nov 5th 2004, 12:51 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by wicked » Nov 4th 2004, 9:41 pm

just wondering did anyone ever recive a copy to beta?
"So this is hell. I'd never have believed it. You remember all we were told about the torture-chambers, the fire and brimstone, the "burning marl." Old wive's tales! There's no need for red-hot pokers. HELL IS - OTHER PEOPLE!"

murfdurf22
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no i haven't recieved one yet

Post by murfdurf22 » Nov 4th 2004, 10:46 pm

no i haven't recieved a copy from ilovemyboo yet, he/she was suppossed to send it soon but i never got mine, did anyone else ever get their copy???

ilovemyboo
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really sorry / bein lazy / but here it is

Post by ilovemyboo » Nov 5th 2004, 1:07 am

ok yall soryy but its takin a heck of a lot longer then i thought i would for me to type this up,sorry. and gues what MY EMAIL WONT LET ME IN so i would still appreciate it if you could just tell me how much i suck on here instead (just kidding) but if i do dont be afraid to say somthin


(still in need of title)

(ok this is the major problem right here I cant think of away for them to meet up if you have any suggestions let me know!!!! On with the story)


We cut to angela and Jordan in what looks to be a limo.
AngelaVO-Well this is just pathetic. Here I am poor collage student. While Jordan’s some millionaire

Jordan- so what have you been up to
Angela- oh you know, collage
Jordan- really, what’s your, major
Angela- well I’m in the performing arts
Jordan- like what
Angela- you know, drama
Jordan- oh….
Akward silence
Jordan- I really missed you. I thought of calling you but …..i didn’t know what was going on with you and stuff.
Angela- like what stuff
Jordan- I don’t know …..like if you had a boyfriend
Angela (smiles) oh that
Jordan- ya, that …..so do you
Angela- oh umm I did for a while
Jordan- oh, who
Angela- brian (Jordan gives her a confused look and she catches on) brain
Jordan- oh brain
Angela- ya, brain (short laugh)
Jordan- so where to
Angela- oh you know where ever
Jordan- (being cautouse) wanna go to my place
Angela rolls her eyes and smiles
Angela VO typicall Jordan , seen me for 30 mins tops and hes already trying to get into my pants
Angela- sure (giving him a don’t excpect anything look)
Jordan smiles and nods his head
Jordan (to cheuffer) my place


We cut to a door opening and angela and Jordan walking in the house Jordan flips on the lights revealing a very big well furnished room angela tries her hardest not to seem impressed
Jordan- so you want a drink
Angela (oh hell no he’s not getting me drunk) no I’m fine
Jordan-you sure
Angela- yeah
Jordan gestures for angela to sit down she dose and he sits next to her she looks around trying to fin something to start a conversation about when her eyes settle on her seniour pic hanging on the wall
Angela- oh my gosh……. Where did you get that
Jordan (smiles) you gave it to me remember
Angela- vagually
Jordan- so are you working
Angela- yeah uhh im a bartender
Jordan (smiles)
Angela- what?
Jordan- nothing, its just that sweet innocent-
Angela (cuts him off) hey, im not that sweet and innocent anymore catalono
Jordan- ow yeah
Angela- (unconvinsingly) yes
Jordan laughs
Angela- shut up (playfully pushes him)

(ok so your sayin to yourself dang she really sucks at closina story but it goes on so keep looking for updates)
MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE
"forget about those dirty looks, the photographs your boyfriend took"(giggle giggle giggle)
"this isn't a fashion statement, ITS A FU***** DEATH WISH"
"Say goodbye to the hearts you break and all the cyanid you drank"
*dancing is like camping ....... It's in tents

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Post by Jody Barsch* » Nov 5th 2004, 1:18 am

Is Angela in college, or does she study at the university of cutting and pasting? :wink:
Kickstart The Riches movie!

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Post by Natasha (candygirl) » Nov 5th 2004, 1:30 am

:jumplaugh:

Jody, you're cracking me up! Maybe she is at the college of collages.

:wink:
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You could have sex with me if you really want to help...I guess that's a "no"?

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