Help with Graham and Hallie!

[Guest]

I'm currently writing an episode 20 (yes another one.lol!) , but I'm having trouble writing Hallie and Graham. I have a plot line in my head of what I want to do with the two of them, but the scenes I write just don't seem good enough.

If anyone could help me, or even want to collaborate with me I'd appreciate it very much.

[Jody Barsch*]

What's the plot line you are working on for them? I'm not clear on what you're having difficulty with. Personally I feel that Graham is never going to act on anything with Hallie, but I know many others feel differently.

Hallie speaks with a lot of energy with a youthfull vocabulary, she teases Graham, and while she irritates him, he is also intrigued by it.