'MSCL: Return to Three Rivers' Fanfic

[Rick]

Hi everyone, I'm Rick and my friend and I have just started a MSCL fanfic at DRtv (A fanfic message board)

"My So Called Life: Return to Three Rivers" picks up 10 years after Angela's graduation. She is living in New York City, working for the Daily News and engaged to her boyfriend Jeff Madison.

I'd like to invite you all to take a look

My So-Called Life: Return to Three Rivers
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[Cami A.]

Hey Rick.

I just checked out the first episode of "Return to Three Rivers".
I loved the fact that you inserted the Cranberries song that came on the radio into the fic. It's fun when stories are almost interactive like that.
About the story itself, I love the set up of the plot, but you need to show us rather than tell us. Everything is explained in black and white too much...
Overall it was entertaining, and I can't wait to see what has happened to the gang! When will you update next?

[Rick]

Hey Rick.

I just checked out the first episode of "Return to Three Rivers".
I loved the fact that you inserted the Cranberries song that came on the radio into the fic. It's fun when stories are almost interactive like that.
About the story itself, I love the set up of the plot, but you need to show us rather than tell us. Everything is explained in black and white too much...
Overall it was entertaining, and I can't wait to see what has happened to the gang! When will you update next?

Thanks for the feedback Cami. Episode 1.02 has now been posted. New episodes will be posted on Mondays and Thursdays with an occasional Wednesday episode.

If I'm being honest, the first few episodes may be a little boring, with the re-introduction of characters and whatnot. We start hitting our stride at the reunion and beyond.

Also, we allow guests to post replies on DRtv, so there's need to sign up unless you want to? If you ever want to comment, pleasde feel free.

[Cami A.]

Thanks for the info, Rick.
I'll check it out.

[Cami A.]

Rick,
I just read the second episode.
Again, I feel that there was a little bit too much explanation, and not enough showing...
Even Angela's dialogue is unnatural. She explains things in these long-winded sentences that don't seem real.
However, I do love your set up once again. It's great that we are seeing Danielle all grown up, with her own ideas and a voice. Finally!
And nice Voice Over at the end!