Help with Graham and Hallie!

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Help with Graham and Hallie!

Post by Guest » Jul 30th 2004, 11:03 pm

I'm currently writing an episode 20 (yes another!) , but I'm having trouble writing Hallie and Graham. I have a plot line in my head of what I want to do with the two of them, but the scenes I write just don't seem good enough.

If anyone could help me, or even want to collaborate with me I'd appreciate it very much.

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Post by Jody Barsch* » Aug 2nd 2004, 10:09 pm

What's the plot line you are working on for them? I'm not clear on what you're having difficulty with. Personally I feel that Graham is never going to act on anything with Hallie, but I know many others feel differently.

Hallie speaks with a lot of energy with a youthfull vocabulary, she teases Graham, and while she irritates him, he is also intrigued by it.
Sometimes I write a little MSCL fanfiction:
Also, after multiple V. Mars reiterations, and finally a Deadwood movie, still wishing for some continuation of The Riches !

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