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by 4alifetime
Sep 9th 2009, 3:19 pm
Forum: FanFiction
Topic: Honest Feedback and College Suggestions Needed!
Replies: 22
Views: 11627

Re: Honest Feedback and College Suggestions Needed!

Thanks for all the great ideas and feedback Steve! I like the flashback idea, and may use it. I've written a few more mini-chapters but have yet to address Angela and Rayanne directly, but I will. You'll also be happy to know that there is more dialogue! It's been a few weeks, have you written anyth...
by 4alifetime
Aug 21st 2009, 10:19 am
Forum: Music
Topic: What are lifers listening to these days?
Replies: 181
Views: 62996

Re: What are lifers listening to these days?

Me either Shanna! I even have a hard time looking at her! We definitley like some of the same music! I think I was born too late also, LOL! It's nice to "meet" you!
by 4alifetime
Aug 21st 2009, 9:18 am
Forum: Other TV Shows
Topic: What are Lifer's watching these days?
Replies: 120
Views: 40341

Re: What are Lifer's watching these days?

My husband got Flight of the Conchords as a gift. It's an aquired taste! LOL! We liked it though!
by 4alifetime
Aug 12th 2009, 9:30 pm
Forum: FanFiction
Topic: Honest Feedback and College Suggestions Needed!
Replies: 22
Views: 11627

Chapters 3 & 4

Sorry Steve...no dialogue in Chapter 3....dude, what is my issue there lol? Well, there is no meaningful dialogue anyway! Enjoy....and I promise more dialogue coming in the future! PS. I'll admit to Ch. 3 being a little boring but I had to get some of that stuff out of the way, it was necessary to e...
by 4alifetime
Aug 12th 2009, 8:59 pm
Forum: FanFiction
Topic: Honest Feedback and College Suggestions Needed!
Replies: 22
Views: 11627

Re: Honest Feedback and College Suggestions Needed!

Hey Steve, First of all, thanks for taking the time to read what I have so far. I appreciate it a ton! I agree that I need more dialogue. I didn't even realize it at first but it seems my 2nd chapter has, like, none! :lol: Like I said, this popped into my head and I wrote it in an hour or two at mos...
by 4alifetime
Aug 12th 2009, 10:29 am
Forum: FanFiction
Topic: Life of Jordan, Episode #20
Replies: 22
Views: 15689

Re: Life of Jordan, Episode #20

Final thoughts: FINALLY! We know the "whole truth" about the letter, what a relief! :lol: I agreed with the earlier comment that it was very hard to see Graham reject Patty, but it was very realistic. I always thought Graham would need to lose Patty to in order to realize how much he needed her. I a...
by 4alifetime
Aug 11th 2009, 11:09 am
Forum: The Show
Topic: Complete MSCL Episodes Now On Hulu
Replies: 4
Views: 11753

Re: Complete MSCL Episodes Now On Hulu

That's awesome! :D I had checked there once before and was disappointed MSCL wasn't there.
by 4alifetime
Aug 10th 2009, 1:10 pm
Forum: FanFiction
Topic: Any Rickie Fanfic out there?
Replies: 3
Views: 7298

Re: Any Rickie Fanfic out there?

Wow, that's probably the least believable storyline to come from the show but she did a good job! I like the tone of the story. You can really feel the emotions. I just posted another start to a fan fic that resulted from this conversation! It started out as a Rickie fan fic and then I don't know wh...
by 4alifetime
Aug 10th 2009, 11:45 am
Forum: FanFiction
Topic: Honest Feedback and College Suggestions Needed!
Replies: 22
Views: 11627

Honest Feedback and College Suggestions Needed!

I was initially writing my first fan fic in journal entry format alternating between Angela and Brian. I struggled with moving the storyline along that way and then out of the clear blue this new story hit me like lightning all at once. Any feedback would be appreciated as I wrote this very very fas...
by 4alifetime
Aug 8th 2009, 3:41 pm
Forum: FanFiction
Topic: Any Rickie Fanfic out there?
Replies: 3
Views: 7298

Re: Any Rickie Fanfic out there?

What? No one? LOL! Hm...maybe I'll take this as a challenge!
by 4alifetime
Aug 8th 2009, 3:39 pm
Forum: FanFiction
Topic: story recommendations-what are your favorite stories?
Replies: 4
Views: 8585

Re: story recommendations-what are your favorite stories?

If fan fics that pick up right after the show ended and stay very true to the original character's then I recommend "Life of Jordan" from stburr91. Very very good!
by 4alifetime
Aug 7th 2009, 11:03 am
Forum: FanFiction
Topic: Life of Jordan, Episode #20
Replies: 22
Views: 15689

Re: Life of Jordan, Episode #20

Day 2: Brian and Danielle were my favorites! You do a great job of setting up setting up for what may be coming next!!!!!

Allison
by 4alifetime
Aug 7th 2009, 10:45 am
Forum: The Music Of My So-Called Life
Topic: W.G. Snuffy Walden's MSCL score
Replies: 40
Views: 13774

Re: ANGELA SMILED

Good to know, thanks. I'll have to check it out.
by 4alifetime
Aug 6th 2009, 1:04 pm
Forum: The Show
Topic: MSCL "I Spy"- NEW GAME!
Replies: 12
Views: 2261

Re: MSCL "I Spy"- NEW GAME!

I can remember 2 instances where a Game Boy appeared. The first was when the little girl at Angela's grandparent's anniversary party(played by Winnie's daughter) played one probably out of boredom! The second was when Danielle was playing a Game Boy trying to be invisible so she could listen to Patt...
by 4alifetime
Aug 5th 2009, 1:30 pm
Forum: FanFiction
Topic: Life of Jordan, Episode #20
Replies: 22
Views: 15689

Re: Life of Jordan, Episode #20

Steve, Ok, so....I have only read Day 1(so far!). But I want to thank you for this because I truly loved it. I generally have a hard time reading fan fics in script form, but yours flowed! I especially loved Graham and think you got him down perfectly! As an adult now watching the show, I have to ad...