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I'm currently writing an episode 20 (yes another one.lol!) , but I'm having trouble writing Hallie and Graham. I have a plot line in my head of what I want to do with the two of them, but the scenes I write just don't seem good enough.

If anyone could help me, or even want to collaborate with me I'd appreciate it very much.

What's the plot line you are working on for them? I'm not clear on what you're having difficulty with. Personally I feel that Graham is never going to act on anything with Hallie, but I know many others feel differently.

Hallie speaks with a lot of energy with a youthfull vocabulary, she teases Graham, and while she irritates him, he is also intrigued by it.