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Dude, you totally nailed Rayanne! I could really picture her saying those things, and scheming. Should I be worried for Rickie? I feel that this may not go down well... Digression: The Simpsons. Once I had a dream based on some of the driving games, where Homer was running into things. And yes he wa...

Wow, you literally posted just as I was about to formulate a reply. That's weird. Anyway... Nice dream! I often have dreams about TV characters... lately, they're mostly MSCL and The Simpsons. Nutty, I know. So what were they doing, studying for their midterms? And where was Hilary Clinton in all th...

Good point about Rickie not accepting help. I think Rayanne cared more than she seemed to on the surface (not just with Rickie, but in general). Take "Guns And Gossip", for instance. She claimed to Angela that it was no big deal. But then why did she almost cry in the classroom, when Rickie made tha...

Oh yeah, I was totally proud of Rickie in the last episode too! I cheered when he came out to Delia. And then he pulled a Vasquez and said that if he was attracted to girls, he'd be attracted to her... is there anything sweeter? He pretty much is a freshly-washed puppy. I just wanna hug him! I have ...

Yup, a good story needs tension... and such. Poor Rayanne! She really does need Angela and Rickie. The ending of the series was kinda bittersweet for her... even Rickie was barely talking to her! I mean I know she deserved it, but still. Anyway, yeah, the eighth chapter of my story is nearly done. I...

Okay! Revised version of Krakow: It's better. I was more saying, when you put "he stuttered", it doesn't really sound like stuttering. One thing I would change: "but not before I saw his face flush bright pink from embarrassment." You don't need to say it's from embarrassment. You've already shown h...

Oh okay, good they're not romantic pairings. I was all, "Rayanne/Rickie? Wait... what ?" Just some quick things. "...they were both leaning against the lockers closing their eyes as if mocking Catalano." BEST LINE EVER. "Vasquez, take the money or die!" SECOND BEST LINE EVER. Awww Rickie. He did hat...

Oh, this is awesome. Cherski! Krakow! Oh, the hilarity of it all! Is this going to turn into like, the weirdest love triangle in history? Or... what do you mean by pairings? I'm a bit confused as to where Rickie fits in? Anyway, on to the specifics. I love that Rayanne is shaving in the bathroom, go...

Ah, thanks for your comments about my video! That's the essence of subtext, isn't it? If it's too obvious, people go crazy; if it's not obvious enough, only the crazies notice it. But I'm not insane, oh no! It's just the rest of the world that is. :P I actually have a fanfic involving them... as a t...

Re: Angela I think it's perfect that Angela was not some faultless heroine. At times she wasn't even the hero. I'm not sure what you mean by a "good person". She was inherently good, in my humble opinion ( :wink: ), but also flawed. Her actions were typical for a fifteen-year-old. She didn't know ho...

Though it may go against everything I believe, I, too, think a kiss at the end of the series would probably have been a bad idea. Of course, they could 've blown all our minds. But they already did, with Brian's confession, and the look on Angela's face. To me, her expression said everything a kiss ...

Might as well give this a whirl... INT. HALLWAY, SAME TIME Brian is at his locker, trying several times to correctly spin the combo. He sighs, pauses, looks around, brows compactly together. Spots Rickie, who's smiling as he walks. At Brian's expression, Rickie's sobers, and his head jerks a nod. Br...

The seventh chapter of Staring Down The Sun is up! It's called, "Complete(ly Miserable)" and it takes place during Why Jordan Can't Read.

Link to the most recent chapter is this way. I'd really appreciate feedback.

I have to say, the DVD ain't too shabby! The packaging is quite nice and I love all the little doodles on it. Bonus features are great--my favourites were the "Characters" sections and the Danes/Holzman conversation (the latter not just for Claire expressing the want for Angela and Brian to get toge...

Wow, Jody! Thank you so much for the comments! I've been lurking around the boards, and I have to say: you're really good with constructive criticism. It's such a blessing when someone thinks about your story the way you yourself have. And I'm glad you liked the fic. :D In truth, I haven't been work...