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i loved the story, a few mistakes and a lot of things i think you could switch around and reword. ANd I think you used the word, introspective in the wrong way. Not positive, but i'm quite sure you did, other than that it's all good. And Beverly hills person, you don't have to be so mean, the story ...

i liked it, it was really, good and interesting. Glad you're back!

Moderator note: topic moved to the Afterlife forum I was watching Thats so Raven, and it was an episode, on there about racisim, and Sharon Cherski was the one being racist :( . anyway, i was just shocked to see her, did anyone else see her. Sorry, i forgot her real name, i think it's Devon Odessa,...

if those stories weren't the best fan fictions i've ever read on this site then i must be insane. I really loved the 2nd one, and how you totally have the characters down packed. That story was off the chain. I cannot wait to read more of your fanfictions. i love how you have ANgela and Jordan's rel...

thanks juli, you were being helpful, you didn't offend me or anybody else i don't think. but thanks again. I will just go with what fits with my story and explain it to the readers. THANKS EVERYBODY!!!

OOPS MY BADD I MEAN HE A SENIOR AND ANGELA A JUNIOR...

screw it , i've come to the point where i could care less anymore, in my stories right now he's a seinor and Angelas a senior since they've already had their summer vacation....but anyways, i'm gettin off of this subject because it ....sucks or something, i don't know i just don't care how old he is...

i went to the the characters thing in the hallway section of this website, and i went to where they talk about Jordan Catalano, and they said he was a Junior while Angela was a sophmore. The anonymous person was actually right. He is supposed to be a senior right now while Angela is a junior. i get ...

okay, but i still really don't know what to do about the stories. The anonymous writer has that he's a senior right now, but he's really supposed to be a junior right now with Angela. Am i supposed to keep, going along with what she wrote or continue the stories with Jordan being a Junior and then t...

okay so, i'm sure everybody knows about that anonymous writer who up and left us on the spot, well anyways in her stories she made Jordan and Angela be in the same grade in a few stories, that was when Angela was a sophmore and so was Jordan, but then when it was summer vacation for them, she had Jo...

YOU'RE HUIE!? YOU'RE THE ONE WHO SAID I WAS A BIT FIESTY OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT, ABOUT WHAT I HAD SAID TO SOMEONE ON HERE. LOL! thats funny...well to me anyway. but anyways, yeah i read your stories all the time girl, i look everyday to see if you put out something else. Oh and yeah, that was me, wh...

no no no no no, you ain't make me mad or nothing i was just confused. i mean about that whole i thought you was cool and you ain't, let me rephrase that, i thought you were sane but i don't know anymore. but on the real, you ain't offend me or nothing, lol, i wouldn't get offended by nothing like th...

WHAT THE HECK DOES THIS HAVE TO DO WITH MSCL, OR FANFICTION OR SOMETHING. WHAT THE HECK IS THIS ABOUT, HUNTER AND MERCEDES AND STUFF. OH, AND WHO SAYS, "YOUR MOTHER" ANYWAY? WE ARE NOT IN THE 90'S ANYMORE. WE DO NOT KNOW THOSE PEOPLE, AND WHAT KIND OF HELP ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT. YOU SAID YOU NEEDED ...

maybe you could write about Patty trying to find her family, since she's adopted. I mean i know she tried once and gave up but maybe you could write about one when she tried again and didn't give up. Or something to do with Graham and Hallie....just a suggesstion (i think i spelled that wrong, o wel...

Candygirl i do agree with you on the whole needing to have thicker skin or whatever when it comes to people talking about someone's stories. When i think about it, you really are correct because I noticed some errors in the story too but since ilovemyboo wasn't finished with the whole story i assume...